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标题: 08年6月大学英语六级作文最后五道预测题:part1 [打印本页]
作者: 烟雨未落    时间: 2008-6-6 12:01
标题: 08年6月大学英语六级作文最后五道预测题:part1
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of  Immoral Behavior in Public. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:- v/ `; D  K# `! {" \+ p
1.我们经常在公共场合见到各种不道德的行为，叙述你的一次相关经历。7 H0 d) q( t" |- F$ D5 P2 J& `
2.这些不文明行为会有哪些影响。
4 W; F9 \- c; A  b3 U( ]3.我们应该怎样改善这种现象。# Z/ X- x* h, s0 ?) \/ Q& \
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审题概述?
/ a- X3 n" e1 S3 S这是一篇议论文，可以根据作文要求列出提纲：第一部分，列举不文明行为并叙述一次相关经历；第二部分，不文明行为的影响，一两个即可；第三部分，提出建议。
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【范文】, `* D( C+ l9 z5 m: {: r  \
Immoral Behavior in Public
To witness ①immoral behavior in public, one need only visit the Beijing subway. I still remember the first time I took the Beijing subway. It was an early morning. I was in a hurry to go to school. When I was trying to get a ticket, I found a lot of people waiting in front of me, but nobody was in the line.
①Immoral behaviors in public ②initiate a series of problems. One of the most serious ones is that it may exert a negative impact on our ③sense of social responsibility. We will keep ignoring other people’s rights and feelings, and in turn, we too will be disrespected some day.
, q8 T! d3 w/ U% g% p9 UThe reform of ①this phenomenon is certainly not easy. With an eye on practical ②implementation  and ③cost effectiveness , I propose that society make it clear in every way that people who fail to respect the ④common good will be seriously punished. Stricter policies for this should be made to correct this phenomenon as soon as possible.5 g6 v$ g; {  b& A* ^; |  |9 j
We all expect “A World without Thieves". Everyone ①shares the huge responsibility of ②demonstrating his or her justice at the proper time. Personal responsibility is vital to build a harmonious socialist society. 3 t8 z" ?$ u+ \! }; K
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第一段思路点评
  G7 h7 \4 G3 V作文要求第一点，相关经历& B. ~5 Q8 y0 Q- T

& ~! k! J# {" A% t7 V语言点提示
% @1 }, m: n0 i0 U! s+ L: e8 h* `1.immoral behavior in public：直接点题
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$ w& I3 j6 `2 P) E+ L第二段思路点评
" o  h" K5 v* b  S& p不文明行为的影响
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1.immoral behavior in public：重复名词词组，与第一段衔接
' S* f1 m; V  l; s2.initiate：意思是“产生，发动”- s9 q# J( |5 O! F) ~
3.sense of social responsibility：意思是“社会责任感”
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: B) n1 D& {: @1 S( a第三段思路点评
3 X7 k, B) V1 g8 ~5 f8 x3 ]) P如何改善这些现象; I' ?4 @- B7 e1 g5 c# y

) t7 ]/ R, s6 F# Z; J& m7 q/ d0 D# P语言点提示
7 u+ a& n# `) f1.this phenomenon：指代前文“immoral behavior in public”，
4 `. M  K$ v* p与上文衔接，且避免重复
5 G* ]: H  b) K* i# K: H2.implementation：意为“执行，实施”$ T7 t$ S& o* x; J3 {* ^# O
3.cost effectiveness：意为“成本效率”" X: K$ t0 w( N" A4 i
4.common good：意为“公益”
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, u4 U+ ?. H- N第四段思路点评
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+ _4 x) |. i' w, C# C总结, L/ P- p8 A0 y# \* v1 a
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语言点提示
( q4 @& t& R& N; ^% [: t3 X1share a huge responsibility: 意为“承担重大责任”; w2 z: Z. r8 g% V* Q
2.demonstrate：意为“展现”



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