我写的英文版军训打油诗一首

想~想

<>To be excellent as my mate</P>

8 c+ d" r& X4 q/ f9 a) `<>The wind blows away the cloud,</P>
<>The sun shines bitterly on the ground.</P>
: @" {  H1 F  B5 n5 ?$ l) @<>I feel pain on my feet,</P>
<>My back is covered with sweat,</P>
<>My knees is shaking,</P>
<>The military training is tiring.</P>
+ p2 H/ W; Y+ F! ]$ f<>But I know everyone will bear the hardship,</P>
<>No one will give up.</P>
2 t6 y  L" z+ J8 r/ o4 H: `2 \3 N<>With the discinpline in my mind,</P>
1 e# O  X! _' p" d, c& j<P>I will obey the offical's command.</P>
# E5 [! U- }1 `( r<P>I will do my best,</P>
<P>To be excellent as my mate.</P>
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风吹沙地

哈哈有意思,不过应该是To be excellent as my mateS吧

<>There're some words that can't be undersstood by me.</P><>How wish you were here!!My Longman!!</P>