我写的英文版军训打油诗一首

想~想

<>To be excellent as my mate</P>
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! }6 c- U9 W1 ^. f! a! }1 F$ b<>The wind blows away the cloud,</P>
( }, l. \, y) H; ?. J) v; _( @<>The sun shines bitterly on the ground.</P>
5 w# a1 T/ k: |2 K% U: M* U. R! [% Z: v<>I feel pain on my feet,</P>
4 L9 F! D: f& G2 ]2 d! @, |& M9 o. e2 g2 S<>My back is covered with sweat,</P>
<>My knees is shaking,</P>
<>The military training is tiring.</P>
! O' M+ f1 h( g% ]<>But I know everyone will bear the hardship,</P>
" l/ F6 R+ F) \& K; X4 `<>No one will give up.</P>
<>With the discinpline in my mind,</P>
<P>I will obey the offical's command.</P>
$ L% `$ Y# }) |. e<P>I will do my best,</P>
  {# e$ z  [. E8 z" ~<P>To be excellent as my mate.</P>
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风吹沙地

哈哈有意思,不过应该是To be excellent as my mateS吧

<>There're some words that can't be undersstood by me.</P><>How wish you were here!!My Longman!!</P>