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原帖由 Jonas 于 2004-5-26 22:30 发表 ![]()
" G& h+ Q/ G$ L# Y9 }" ?Here are some mistakes:
( }: k9 C- w3 ^7 q; @9 \Welcome(please read it)
% Z6 g& @( F- I7 h! V/ yhello, everyone! i am the master of this section. welcome to english corner. follows are some advice that tell you how to enjoy yourself here.(I think ...
+ |# h, J m" ]9 a" k( sI am afraid that is still incorrect.
- i: {2 o8 ?3 m$ {1 T6 LI left a corrected version in LZ's mailbox two weeks ago, but it has not been picked up.
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2 l( d- G; Z/ ~( U' m. a+ K7 i版主is not a "master".2 G: I% m" T3 {% I, D4 Q+ W( i
下沙大学生论坛 is a BBS. People who are in charged are "Administrators" (管理员)
: Q2 f3 ^) c5 EEach individual section, such as the "English Corner", is a "board" (版.) A 版主 is a "moderator".) A; L1 }: a5 ^% m2 w+ v0 O
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2 c8 `% h1 Y& w+ o, f/ n"Everything" should be "anything": a frequently made mistakes by Chinese students.5 c8 K; t9 `5 m7 P
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& v1 v* [) j0 ~Welcome(please read it)->Welcome. Please read.- f0 ]* F2 b( ?& X/ J
Hello, Everyone! I am the (master)->(moderator) of this section. Welcome to (the) English Corner. (Follows)->(The following) are some advice that tell you how to enjoy yourself here. (You tell people by advicing them:The following are advice you should follow for enjoying yourselves here.) (Use plural "yourselves" since you are addressing this to all visitors.)
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( W+ C8 M) t& `$ h1. Please don't say anything that is unwelcome such as politics (and uncivil words).(This sentence is awkward, try -> Please be polite and courteous and do not air undesirable opinions such as politics.
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/ g- O1 U2 j7 O2. Please don't just leave a simple word "up".->Do not leave frivolous replies such as "up."8 P: n& K/ \2 u. [& J; O2 e, [6 E
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3. Please use English as much as possible and review your words some times to check out if there are any mistakes. If you do that, you'll find your English have been marvelously improved.
; i3 N3 F8 X" O8 M) _-->Please use English as much as possible and check your work for mistakes. When you do that, you will find your English marvelously/remarkably/significantly improved.
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4. If you have any great English sentences and articals or (everything)->(anything) about English please share it with us.
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) l- P2 ]5 _/ Z0 @Please don't hesitate to jion us, don't be shy to speak out. We are all LEARNING!-> (The use of the comma created a run-on sentence: incorrect comma splice. Add the conjunction "and", or change the comma into a semicolon.) ...to join us, and don't... (or ...to join us; don't); Z! r' r) |: f1 {9 Z0 p$ w* l
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